Friday 24 August 2018

Mars writing

I believe that we should move to mars because it’s the only other planet that we can live on, we can build a colony and finally we need to move to mars to save the human race from global warming. 

I firmly believe that we should go to mars because it’s the only other planet we can live on other than earth. It may have a lot of dust storms that last up to four months and volcanoes . But we can survive those little dust storms. 

We could create a new world on mars and plant trees. Build colony stations and also bring oxygen tanks. Secondly it is true that mars used to have water and a bit of oxygen until the water froze and co2 took over mars.There is 95.32% of co2 on mars.We could solve the co2 problem by planting more trees to make oxygen and the problem with the frozen water we can’t solve that problem because of the co2 it made the water toxic which means we can’t drink it 

So I strongly believe that we should move to mars because if earth gives up on us, well, we're dead! Maybe if we send half of us on earth to mars the human race might actually survive. We have up to 7.6 billion people on earth!  Which causes global warming, talking about global warming also known as Climate change it is known for the world heating up and causing more rain, floods,tsunamis,volcanoes and rising water levels. Which causes deaths and  towns and countries getting destroyed.Our earth is not the same that’s why we want to move to mars and create a new world world because on earth 


WALT-Write a persuasive writing and use emotive language

1 comment:

  1. Tena koe Jahnera,
    Wow I am really impressed with your argument, you have made some great points and backed them up with sound reasoning and logic. I did not realise the water on Mars was toxic due to the CO2.
    I disagree with you on the fact that we should move to Mars as I think we could use that money to try and slow global warming. I would rather live on Earth than Mars.
    What do you think we could do to try and slow global warming as individuals?
    Nga mihi,
    Mark

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