Descriptive writting

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Long ago in a mysterious land called pandora.People could roam through the land. The trees always waved at me as I ran past.I was always hunting my prey like a mother watching her kids.The water always lifted my hair while swimming  .The water is like a baby blue crystal sliding down your back giving you shivers with a hint of evil. Our people are like Crystal  blue oceans running through nature hunting you down. Our Moon is a bright block of cheese.Our Floating islands are just like you lifting a glass of water.The Birds lift up your hair while sitting on the grass. Our creatures hunt you down with their sharp teeth and leathery skin. Our flowers are just the same as a totara tree. At night the animals creeped and would pounce up at anytime. The animals are your worst enemies. The sun is a dark soul trying to break free. When you touch our flaming hot fire you’ll feel a spark in your hand. Our fog is a mysterious piece of art because you never know if  a creature cold pounce up at you.Our island is like no other the rocks swing around your head. the ruler is as tall as a giant.the princess is cold hearted dark free spirited. The rocks surrounded our land. We call ourselves avatars.Our island is mysterious not visited by much but kept top secret.Mysterious to all.