I am a Year 8 student at Kereru Park Campus in Auckland, NZ. I am in Akomanga 3 and my Kaiako is Whaea Lujoe. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Jahnera my name is Tane I am from Ahipara Schoo. I really like your opinion, maybe next time you could add some pictures but other than that your writing was very awesome ka pai.
Hello Jahnera, I really like your Shrek muffin voki. It is one of the funniest things I have ever seen! Next time you could make him look more like Shrek.
Hello Jahnera its Rata from Ahipara School. I really liked your voki but when I listened to it it sounded like every thing had an echo, so if you fix that it will be perfect.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
hi Jahnera cool blog post it is funny but you need to add more detail.
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Hi Jahnera my name is Tane I am from Ahipara Schoo. I really like your opinion, maybe next time you could add some pictures but other than that your writing was very awesome ka pai.
ReplyDeleteHi Jahnera my name is Hunter, this is very interesting and cool. Maybe next time you could add more detail about voki.
ReplyDeleteHi Jahnera its Brodie from Ahipara School I like your post how did you make it?
ReplyDeleteKia ora its Osheya from, your buddy school Ahipara, your voki is very funny and also, how did you make it?
ReplyDeleteHello Jahnera,
ReplyDeleteI really like your Shrek muffin voki. It is one of the funniest things I have ever seen! Next time you could make him look more like Shrek.
Hi Jahnera its Darius from Ahipara school you made a cool blog. I like your voki but if you put more detail in. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHi I like your voki maybe you could add more info.
ReplyDeleteHello Jahnera its Rata from Ahipara School. I really liked your voki but when I listened to it it sounded like every thing had an echo, so if you fix that it will be perfect.
ReplyDeleteHello Jahnera I like your voki and its probably the funniest one I´ve seen. Why is the Queens face stretched?
ReplyDeleteHi Jahnera I love your voki it´s a great Shrek but maybe next time you could write some detail.
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