If i were to go back in the 1930's i'd give one family a bunch of new games and gifts for the family like a gift basket,Healthy food,New washing machine and a dryer i might also give them a car that can fit in everyone i would also buy them a new i would give them a dog/Cat i'd also give them new clothes and nice shoes like nikes and puma's also some heels for the mum and some socks and my last thing i'd give them is a cadbury chocolate cake
Hi Jah,i just have a quick question... Why did you say "I would buy them a new" then you said"I would also give them ...."???
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hello Jahnera,
ReplyDeletei really like how you put a lot of effort in your work. but your
writing does not make scene, this is what you said "I would buy them a new" and another one you said "I would also give them ...."?
Hi aleena
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Hey jahnera
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you said you will give them a washing machine.how you are going to give them some healthy before they only eat junk food.
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HI jahnera
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you said that you would give then a dog and cat.Would you do that in real life
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