Descriptive writting

WALT-Recraft our writing to add more descriptive language 

Long ago in a mysterious land called pandora.People could roam through the land. The trees always waved at me as I ran past.I was always hunting my prey like a mother watching her kids.The water always lifted my hair while swimming  .The water is like a baby blue crystal sliding down your back giving you shivers with a hint of evil. Our people are like Crystal  blue oceans running through nature hunting you down. Our Moon is a bright block of cheese.Our Floating islands are just like you lifting a glass of water.The Birds lift up your hair while sitting on the grass. Our creatures hunt you down with their sharp teeth and leathery skin. Our flowers are just the same as a totara tree. At night the animals creeped and would pounce up at anytime. The animals are your worst enemies. The sun is a dark soul trying to break free. When you touch our flaming hot fire you’ll feel a spark in your hand. Our fog is a mysterious piece of art because you never know if  a creature cold pounce up at you.Our island is like no other the rocks swing around your head. the ruler is as tall as a giant.the princess is cold hearted dark free spirited. The rocks surrounded our land. We call ourselves avatars.Our island is mysterious not visited by much but kept top secret.Mysterious to all.

Mars writing

I believe that we should move to mars because it’s the only other planet that we can live on, we can build a colony and finally we need to move to mars to save the human race from global warming. 

I firmly believe that we should go to mars because it’s the only other planet we can live on other than earth. It may have a lot of dust storms that last up to four months and volcanoes . But we can survive those little dust storms. 

We could create a new world on mars and plant trees. Build colony stations and also bring oxygen tanks. Secondly it is true that mars used to have water and a bit of oxygen until the water froze and co2 took over mars.There is 95.32% of co2 on mars.We could solve the co2 problem by planting more trees to make oxygen and the problem with the frozen water we can’t solve that problem because of the co2 it made the water toxic which means we can’t drink it 

So I strongly believe that we should move to mars because if earth gives up on us, well, we're dead! Maybe if we send half of us on earth to mars the human race might actually survive. We have up to 7.6 billion people on earth!  Which causes global warming, talking about global warming also known as Climate change it is known for the world heating up and causing more rain, floods,tsunamis,volcanoes and rising water levels. Which causes deaths and  towns and countries getting destroyed.Our earth is not the same that’s why we want to move to mars and create a new world world because on earth 

WALT-Write a persuasive writing and use emotive language

WALT-Use specific nouns and strong verbs

Have.  you ever been on something so high you felt like you were on  the stairway to heaven?
Well this is your lucky day because i am going to teach you how to climb  trapeze

The equipment you will need is Human beings ,Harness,Helmet and Ropes.

We’ve written instructions for you. We know you might know what you’re doing, but please follow them anyway. Failure to do so might mean you cracking your head open and dieing.


Steps:
First off before you do anything always put on harness and helmet
Second off put on the rope that can hold you
Third climb up if you're not to scared
Fourth try make it on there and stand up 
Last but not least  have fun and fly like superman
Just make sure before you get to the ground stand up and have a awesome day

climate change and seasons