WALT-Understand the authors point
I am a Year 8 student at Kereru Park Campus in Auckland, NZ. I am in Akomanga 3 and my Kaiako is Whaea Lujoe. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Showing posts with label Argumentation. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Argumentation. Show all posts
Thursday, 6 September 2018
Friday, 24 August 2018
Mars writing
I believe that we should move to mars because it’s the only other planet that we can live on, we can build a colony and finally we need to move to mars to save the human race from global warming.
I firmly believe that we should go to mars because it’s the only other planet we can live on other than earth. It may have a lot of dust storms that last up to four months and volcanoes . But we can survive those little dust storms.
We could create a new world on mars and plant trees. Build colony stations and also bring oxygen tanks. Secondly it is true that mars used to have water and a bit of oxygen until the water froze and co2 took over mars.There is 95.32% of co2 on mars.We could solve the co2 problem by planting more trees to make oxygen and the problem with the frozen water we can’t solve that problem because of the co2 it made the water toxic which means we can’t drink it
So I strongly believe that we should move to mars because if earth gives up on us, well, we're dead! Maybe if we send half of us on earth to mars the human race might actually survive. We have up to 7.6 billion people on earth! Which causes global warming, talking about global warming also known as Climate change it is known for the world heating up and causing more rain, floods,tsunamis,volcanoes and rising water levels. Which causes deaths and towns and countries getting destroyed.Our earth is not the same that’s why we want to move to mars and create a new world world because on earth
WALT-Write a persuasive writing and use emotive language
Thursday, 5 July 2018
Banning plastic bags
Have you ever stumbled upon a dead turtle spewing out plastic from its mouth?
Well if you haven’t i’m here to tell you how to stop this cause trust me it ain’t pretty it’s horrendous .
Here's a damaging fact; Some turtles have up to 224 pieces of plastic in them. Also about 100 million marine animals die because of our plastic. Plastic bags kill animals. Our plastic kills birds because when they get trapped in out plastic, they starve to death.
Our plastics also cause pollution. They can cause pollution from polymer chains and is it good how they end up in our landfill? No it’s DISGUSTING.Did you know when you burn plastic it causes co2 which breaks down our ozone layer.Which causes floods,tsunamis and death to all.
This is bad for our environment.
Cause it turns into micro plastics and overflows our landfill.
Which means when we build houses, it causes it to smell and rot in the ground. Which also means there going to have to knock down houses. It gets stuck on turtle shells and causes death to them. Which is really sad it turns into coal bleaching in the ocean. that's bad isn’t it?
Glossary
-Polymer chain-
A single polymer molecule may consist of
WALT-Use emotive language in our writing
Monday, 28 May 2018
Should pets be allowed on public transport?
WALT-Take a position and provide evidence to support your claim
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