I am a Year 8 student at Kereru Park Campus in Auckland, NZ. I am in Akomanga 3 and my Kaiako is Whaea Lujoe. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Jennera your work was amazing and had everything that we shouldn't do.I didn't watch the video though because it looked long.I think you should improve making the video shorter.
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hi jennera
ReplyDeleteI like your amazing work
kind reagards trinatee
Hi Jennera your work was amazing and had everything that we shouldn't do.I didn't watch the video though because it looked long.I think you should improve making the video shorter.
ReplyDeleteKind regrets Leith