I am a Year 8 student at Kereru Park Campus in Auckland, NZ. I am in Akomanga 3 and my Kaiako is Whaea Lujoe. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Jahnera, I like the way you used Goggle Slides to do your writing. What shape did you choose to make your soap into? Maybe next time you could make your writing fit the whole page so it is easier to read. Miss Matthews
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hi jahnera I really like your soap making and it looks so cool I wish I did mins like you by
ReplyDeleteHi Jahnera,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used Goggle Slides to do your writing.
What shape did you choose to make your soap into?
Maybe next time you could make your writing fit the whole page so it is easier to read.
Miss Matthews