I am a Year 8 student at Kereru Park Campus in Auckland, NZ. I am in Akomanga 3 and my Kaiako is Whaea Lujoe. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I was learning to be a good writerer.
I thought it was hard because we had to finish it today.
The bit that was fun was putting the writing the words in
Hi Jahnera, if you keep practising you will certainly be a great writer. What do you find hard about sentences? A capital letter at the beginning, an idea, and then a full stop at the end. You have some excellent sentences here. Please remember to add a label to each blog post too.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
you great
ReplyDeleteHi Jahnera, if you keep practising you will certainly be a great writer. What do you find hard about sentences? A capital letter at the beginning, an idea, and then a full stop at the end. You have some excellent sentences here. Please remember to add a label to each blog post too.
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