The forest is matte black like a dark witch house,
The trees are as tall as a giant brown mouse,
The leaves were ripped off the trees,
They lay on the grass quietly, as death as they could be,
The swinging trees, Lifeless and harmed, broken hearted . The wind strongly pushed the tree that fell down from in the ground. Strongly hitting the garden the fence and nearly the house we were as lucky as winning lotto. The trees were going As fast as a flying fox. After the storm a tree fell on a car hit the person very badly. Another tree fell down on a house the family was screaming cause they had just lost their little girl. Then boom i heard a loud noise come from outside the tree collapsed onto our neighbors house they were lucky nothing happened to them or they would of had hurtful luck like a animal getting shot
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